*Validated* Light

1- Name:Light

2- Desired Faction: Knights

3- STR-18
DEX-10
CON-11
INT-8
WIS-10
CHA-18

4- Story: This is something I did for my other forum.


~As Cloud starts to walk over to the cannons they start to rotate. Cloud quickly runs over and jumps into the air but as soon as he feet leave the ground there are several cannonballs flying at him~

“Wow Vale was right they are fast”

~Cloud spins around and draws his zanpakuto and slashes one of the cannonballs, sending it flying at the outer walls. As it collides it releases an explosion.~

“I need to be more careful.”

~Cloud sees another ball heading straight at his chest and swing at it sending it hurdling at one of the cannons. The ball slipped into the barrel of the cannon making it explode. Cloud turns to see three more heading straight for him and falls back to the ground only to see they turned back at him. Cloud waits for them to get close then jumps just above them and kicks them into the ground. Through the smoke Cloud can see 5 more heading at him.~

“ Hadou#54 Crush Wave Hammer of Thor, Bolts of Zeus Rain from the sky. Demons of Hell and Angels of heaven guide the sight.”


~Several bolts of Lighting drop from the sky and a light illuminates From the caster shooting the bolts at high speed toward the cannonballs. As each bolt connects explosions echo through the training area. Suddenly a cannonball hits Cloud in the back sending him flying at the wall.~

~Cloud shifts his weight forward and jumps off the walk heading for 5 more cannonballs. As he passes each one he slashes them, making each explode. The final 6 balls head at Cloud.~

“Be creative.”

~Cloud jumps into the air and grabs a ball throwing it at another. The explosion destroys 3 more. Suddenly the last cannonball stops in the air and grows 10 times in size. Cloud slashes the ball several times taking chunks out of it. Then the ball explodes in Cloud’s face sending him into the ground. ~

~As the smoke clears Cloud stands in a 4 foot crater.~

“Vale I’m done.”

~Blood drips from Cloud’s arms and chest.~
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I hope that will work if not let me know I would be happy to write a new one for you.

Well, it's obvious you can role-play!

The story is a bit confusing becuse of the names (who is Vale and who is Cloud?).

I'd just like to know what the story tells, but the rest it pretty neat!

Explain what your story is about (training, test, exam?) and why your char had to do this and you'll be validated.

Oh sorry it was part of bootcamp. I'm cloud and Vale is like my teacher ... if you would like a link I can PM it to you.

No it's all right!

I only wanted a little more info.

VALIDATED!!